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A drawing of 
~DanishDash and myself with our OC's. I don't like doing things for myself, but since this wasn't for that reason I'll manage. Have to say it came out better than I expected it would so I'm more than content with that. Still early on in inking attempts, but progressing. Once I get inking & perspective worked on I'll see what more I can do.
Thanks to 
for the pointers.
Still a ways to go, but it is definitely an improvement over earlier works. As always any feedback is appreciated and yes I need more than a cell phone camera.
Image size
2592x1944px 905.72 KB
Make
LG Electronics
Model
US760
Focal Length
4 mm
Date Taken
Dec 1, 2013, 7:46:15 PM
© 2013 - 2024 Tavor--21
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A quick critique, if you don't mind:
Danish Dash's left lower body is quite wonky. It looks like her front leg is bent inwards.And her rear leg is clipping through the ground. Leaving what I'd perceive as her wing, reaching out and holding Constant Vigil. I realized this wasn't the case because a similar error occured with her other leg. And while you got it right, and drew CV's legs correctly, DD's legs seem to be "on backwards" Another thing to note, is since her rear legs are "behind" her chest region, there would be a line connecting her armpit area, to the upper portion of her arm, to give the impression of distance. You are definitely getting better, don't lose heart
Danish Dash's left lower body is quite wonky. It looks like her front leg is bent inwards.And her rear leg is clipping through the ground. Leaving what I'd perceive as her wing, reaching out and holding Constant Vigil. I realized this wasn't the case because a similar error occured with her other leg. And while you got it right, and drew CV's legs correctly, DD's legs seem to be "on backwards" Another thing to note, is since her rear legs are "behind" her chest region, there would be a line connecting her armpit area, to the upper portion of her arm, to give the impression of distance. You are definitely getting better, don't lose heart